Pryde2000 wrote:Not sure if now is a good time for Isis to leave, I had planned on her jumping in to save Hirai later since Caitlyn won't be able to do it. Though, Clara could show up to that too, maybe. Basically, what I had envisioned was that Grant's plan to kill Turon with a rail gun would fail, then he starts to Force Choke Hirai and just before she passes out Isis and a squad of Republic soldiers drop down from a shuttle flying overhead. The alternative is having Caitlyn jump in and save her, blowing her cover but I don't think I want her identity revealed until the end.
...though, anyone standing close to that trajectory would be way past "choked to death."
Also, do you have anything planned for those cops? Are they like, crooked, or secret agents, or anything, or just CorSec to be played for various "the cops are actually investigating a dude getting his arm ripped off in a subway" sort of things?
Don't really have a plan for them but if you'd like to come up with one be my guest. They are intended to stick around and be a general nuisance but beyond that I got nothing.
"Ol' Doc doesn't hide, he hibernates." -- Doc, Star Wars: The Old Republic
"What do you call it when you kill someone and take all their stuff?"
"Adventuring!" -- Tallis and Hawke, Dragon Age 2.
Pryde2000 wrote:Not sure if now is a good time for Isis to leave, I had planned on her jumping in to save Hirai later since Caitlyn won't be able to do it. Though, Clara could show up to that too, maybe. Basically, what I had envisioned was that Grant's plan to kill Turon with a rail gun would fail, then he starts to Force Choke Hirai and just before she passes out Isis and a squad of Republic soldiers drop down from a shuttle flying overhead. The alternative is having Caitlyn jump in and save her, blowing her cover but I don't think I want her identity revealed until the end.
...though a thought occurs: We'd be bailing on a long drawn out plan to use a sort of deus ex for the ending. Maybe we should play it by ear (or eye, I guess, really)
Well, in the quoted scenario we're taking something that we're building up to (the weird plan by GGPC) and instead of having it be climaxtical, (I just made that word up) we have the cavalry ride in at the last second and save the day. Even though they haven't been much more than hinted at, yet.
Well for it to be a climax a few things need to happen first. If you want to hold off on the GGPC thing for a bit, say a week and a half, maybe? I just need some time for Turon to abduct Caitlyn and drug her using the drugs he's going to get from Hastings. After she's rescued we could then use the GGPC thing for the climax and wrap everything up in a neat little bow and instead if having Isis come to the rescue it will be Caitlyn. The wait can easily be explained, Turon's not exactly in the phone book so he won't be easy to find.
"Ol' Doc doesn't hide, he hibernates." -- Doc, Star Wars: The Old Republic
"What do you call it when you kill someone and take all their stuff?"
"Adventuring!" -- Tallis and Hawke, Dragon Age 2.
Sounds good. Though Hastings is by now a horrible being, a slab of meat-mountain and cyborg parts (we'll see why in upcoming posts) and he's gone all crazier.
Well, just one Sinclair as it turns out. The other two are preoccupied... or at least Caitlyn definitely is. Isis will be preoccupied soon, though, she's going to tear that school apart looking for Caitlyn.
... Also, let's ignore the fact that our timeline got a little fluffed in there somewhere. I wrote most of that post before I saw your second one so I had to make a few additions.
"Ol' Doc doesn't hide, he hibernates." -- Doc, Star Wars: The Old Republic
"What do you call it when you kill someone and take all their stuff?"
"Adventuring!" -- Tallis and Hawke, Dragon Age 2.
Sorry that took so long. Things haven't been going well for me lately and I've been finding it very difficult to care about the things I used to enjoy... Or anything, really. Anyway, I'm hoping to break out of that cycle and get back to some normalcy of myself. Not sure if it will work but we'll see.
In the mean time I've decided to continue this thread even after it's logical conclusion. I'm going to turn it into something like a Nancy Drew series. Every chapter will be a new investigation. I had some ideas lined up but I'm having trouble remembering them at the moment. Oh well, I'm sure it will come back to me.
"Ol' Doc doesn't hide, he hibernates." -- Doc, Star Wars: The Old Republic
"What do you call it when you kill someone and take all their stuff?"
"Adventuring!" -- Tallis and Hawke, Dragon Age 2.