The Hidden Civil War: Act I

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The Hidden Civil War: Act I

Post by Alastar » Thu Mar 31, 2005 9:28 pm

OOC: Will have a OOC thread ready by tomorrow night, if you would like to comment on this, just do it here oocyl, and then maybe a Mod or Admin, can switch to my ooc thread...thank you for your time and eyes. :)

Also this will be known mainly to those who used to know me.
IC:

In the vastness of space, systems away, and planets afar, sat a large rock, far into the reaches of Wild Space. It was a planet unfamiliar to any who have never gazed upon it, and knew only by those who had discovered it.

The name of this acient planet had been called Blatala, but for those not in the native tongue, Gorion. It was a planet of beauty, spectacles, and above all else, honour.

This planet had been discovered years ago, years ago by the man of Cloud Ketcher, back when a former super-power, Hidden Nemesis, and there older leader Admiral Tainer, had been rising to power. In there power grab, Tainer had sent Cloud, out to the Wild, and had hoped for a secondary base.

Cloud had done that, but had never returned, making for a famous death, of killed-in-battle, at the First Hidden Nemesis Civil War. Cloud had given his two younger siblings, Cody Ketcher and his youngest sibling, the beautiful Sky Pollusion, both commands of two high classified Hidden Nemesis war fleets; Storm Fleet, and the highly explosive Shadow Fleet.

The fleets were quite even, though Cody and Shadow Fleet one [/i]Victory Star Destroyer[/i], signified as Flurry.

Sky had taken herself to the Outer Rim territory, had begun doing battle with odd pirates, and smaller mercanery forces. Cody, on the other hand, had went the opposite way, and pursueded Cloud's ambitions on founding a lost planet, and bringing forth a true mercanery force.

The two fleets collided in what would be a known famous for the Clash of the HN Forces: Act I.....the tale unfolds like this.....

OOC: Lemme know how suspenseful this sounds, input is welcomed :mrgreen:

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Post by Alastar » Sun Apr 24, 2005 10:14 pm

IC:

SOMEWHERE DEEP IN THE OUTERIM TERRITORY

Space looked so different from what it did when you were on a planets surface, starring straight up, towards the vastness. Being aboard a ship also you gave you more freedom, and more wya's to flee from enemy trouble. So if they don't bring a Interdictor Cruiser. But those pirates owned nothing of the likes, so they were only the fourth pirate I have taken down in the last month or so. The most remarklby stunning beauty that had ever served in Hidden Nemesis had thought.

...Sky Pollusion was her name. She had served under the former leader of Hidden Nemesis Admiral Tainer, for nearly five years, but it only seemed like yesterday that he had lured his self into a death trap. That death trap was inside a completely remodeled Super Star Destroyer. But some would hear that and think, how could he have trapped himself into anything better. But that was not the case that day, for that Star Destroyer had been made into a large casino, with hotels and everything.

Admiral Tainer made a grave mistake in wishing for the highest Imps to come in person to inspect it, and pass it for the sole purpose of income. The Imps did come, but they set a trap, and in the perfect way as well.
They took him and sentenced him too death, he did die, but so did some high members of the known galaxies leaders, causing a minor ripple in the safety of the galaxy.

Sky then began to think about Deaba, it had been her home for nearly fifthteen long and slow years. Her and her two brothers after hearing the unfortunate news of Tainer, began to establish themselves as leaders, and decided to make that the Headquearters of Hidden Nemesis, and make it the secret base as well.

They had some good times and bad times. But in the end greed had impowered both her brothers, Cody and Cloud Ketcher. They began to fight, and soon were trying to plot each others death's. Sky being the only reasonable had been confronted by both, asking for aide, if war was to come. She, doing the only thing she could, to try and save many of Deabian lives had turned them both down, this angered the both of them, and she was exiled by both.

Sky then saw she was to have no choice, but to go to war, but not with just one of them, but both of them, she needed to defeat them both and bring kindness back to her people.

A tear ran down the beautiful cheek, and a soft knock came to the door.

"Mi lady, we have news of the Deabian people. It appears that both Cody and Cloud abondened it, Cloud apparently went to search for the legendary planet Gorion, while Cody just left. The young officer notified her.

"Thank you Yoshi for the information, which fleets did they summon away witrh them?" Sky questioned.

"Lord Cody whisped away Shadow Fleet, and Lord Cloud fled with Dragoon and Viper Fleet. No word of the Captains they took with them." The young pilot replied.

"Very well alert the men, tell them we're returning home, and going to try and retake our homes." Sky demanded.

"Yes Mi, Lady, I will alert them immediatly." Yoshi saluted, bowed and left the room, leaving Sky and a sighed state of mind.


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SOMEWHERE OUTSIDE OF THE KATHOL SECTOR


The day had been great, and they hadn't had and entanglements of any kinds, but they also couldn't spot any convoys of either pirates or civilians, in which they could capture, and further expand there income in the soon and upcoming civil war. But still a good day nonetheless.Cody Ketcher looked out from the bridge of his Victory Star Destroyer dubbed as Shadow. Soon he would be at war with his brother Cloud, and no doubt the pushover Sky. But he would have one advantage, Thranel.

Thranel was a small planet, but with many resources as well, and it would be able to provide his fleet with what they needed, and would keep his income and man-power to a even number, unlike Cloud and Sky, which had no such luxury.

But Cody knew one of them would try and retake Deaba, most likely Sky, because Cloud would no doubt go looking for unknown planet of Gorion, and Viper and Dragoon Fleet's. Sky however would need more resources, Storm Fleet can only survive for so long, and she would no doubt return and wish for the people to back her, and they most certainly would.

"Helm, make haste to the Deaba System, we have a traitor to hunt, and no doubt we'll find them at Deabe." Cody glanced over to a short chunky fellow known as Officer Plater.

Officer Plater returned his gaze, and just nodded, then begun giving orders to the different officers. They were soon readying for the jump to hyperspace.

OOC: All you pilots can begin once the two meet up, I will also let you know before the engagement which ship your stationed upon.
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Post by Alastar » Thu Apr 28, 2005 2:17 pm

Mareth Van Vorse had been summoned to the bridge of the Twister, while Yoshi Pao had been summoned to the bridge of the BVlizzrad. Both were awaiting the arrival of there leader Sky Pollusion, when suddenly her image appeared on both there Holograms.

"Captains Van Vorse and Pao. As yu may have heard rumours from the Commanders, we are going to return home to Deaba, and try to win back our peoples, in hoping we can win this civil war. I ask only that our men are ready for action? As no doubt either Cody or Cloud will also probably make an appearance there as well" Sky paused for a second to cath her breath "so, we are returning home and your mission's are easy. You are to nuetralize all opposistion, wheter it be by destroying them outright, or to submit them into surrender. Tell your squadrons this, and may the way of the pilot accompany you in your greatest hour....over and out."

Mareth and Yoshi both saluted, and the holograms ended. They both walked off there respected Corvettes bridge, and went to tell there squadron members.

The pilots were altogether announced in there respective ships council room's.


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MEANWHILE ABOARD THE SHADOW, OUTSIDE THE DEABA SYSTEM


An alarm wen toff, not the one for war, the old Foxiallian knew that alarm all to well. But this was the alarm meaning there was an urgency of the commanding officers of the great Star Destroyer Shadow, Fox McLowd sat up in his room, and readied his belongings, and set out his uniform and jumped into the shower...moments later he was uniformed and set out the door, banging on his pilot's doors, awakening the ones who weren't already up.

The pilot walked down the hallway, and reached a large door, which had the letters Pilots Quarters, which was actually the council's room, were they sat and were breifed on there missions, Fox walked in, and was sitted next to an all too familiar man, Cody Ketcher. In walked the majority of the pilots. Several were still being awaited upon, but they would arrive soon enough.

Until the rookies arrived, Fox turned to Cody, and whispered " So are these rumours I keep heariung true friend?" Fox asked curiously.

"All in good time will you know my friend, all in good time." Cody told his older friend. Fox smiled and nodded.




OOC: Jazic, you can now enter the fray in Cody's group, while Mirridon and Aether, you were breifed already(just to move it along, and whatnot, a little faster, and you'll both come in when the battle begins.
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Post by Jazic_Stravican » Sun May 08, 2005 12:35 am

The descending sun left a crimson wake trailing over the still burning wreckage of an illegal settlement as it carried the souls that had been forcibly ripped out of existance into the underworld. Andria Kayth, a girl of nineteen, struggled to free herself from the debris of a collapsed prefab structure. Salvation was tantalizingly close, the hardened shelter just a couple meters away. She desperately tugged at the durasteel I-beam that had her pinned as the sirens began to wail like banshees; heralding the Authority fighters that were dropping down through the atmosphere to finish what they started.

Andria panicked, and struggled to free herself from her bonds, waging a unsuccessful attempt to free herself from the restrictive confines of the sweat-soaked sheets of her bunk. As the effects of the nightmare absconded from her mind, she realized that she was in her quarters on the Shadow and that the sirens that prompted the awful fantasy, were only the whistles of the intercom, calling all officers to report to their respective briefing rooms.

She glanced over at her wingmate, barely able to make out her outline in the darkness of the cabin; who was amazingly still asleep in the other bunk. She quickly showered and changed into her flight suit, and then she shook her wingmate awake, who quickly went through the same routine. They both hurried down to the pilot's briefing room, obviously being in among the stragglers filing in. Andria stopped to grab a cup of caf from the dispenser from the back of the room.

Pretty weak stuff. She thought as she took a sip. I'll have to see if I can snag a cup from the mechanics or the computer systems guys. They make pretty good stuff.

She took a seat among the pilots.

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Post by Alastar » Sat May 14, 2005 3:01 pm

ONBOARD THE VSD SHADOW:

In the war council room, Cody stood up, and gave a quick breifing of what the capital ships will be partaking in, while the squadrons, would be doing there thing. "Corporal McLowd, the floor is now yours." Cody nodded, and sat down next to the old and wise pilot.

"Okay men, and ladies, our mission is actually quite simple. We are to minimize all casualties, while trying to inflict the most casualties. We have reason to believe, that the enemy, Storm Fleet, is hoping to regain control of the planet Deaba, in doing so Commander Pollusion....would then have enough resource," Fox paused to catch his breath, then began again "so this is vital that we do not allow this to happen. Cody has also gave me the duties of being the first ever Squadron Admiral. Meaning if I give a command, follow it. Fail to, and you will be demoteted. Good luck, and may the force, serev those deserviong. Out and dismissed."

Fox McLowd gave a salute, and recieved it back, and was quickly consulting the other squadron leaders.

Cody stood up, and left the room, signalling the final dismissal, and returned to the bridge, and told them to get prepared for the exit of hyperspace.

OOC: The next post will signal the begining of the battle, so prepare yourselves.
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